Tuesday, June 9, 2015

Five Sentence Fiction- Spunk



Mary tossed and turned, sweating, the duvet scrunched at her feet despite the soothing hum of the air conditioner.

She sighed loudly and mentally began ticking off her checklist for the hundredth time.

Hearing four loud chimes from the grandfather clock, she darted up awake, alert and anxious, like a deer being chased by a lion.

Making her way to the kitchen she set the tea pot to boil, taking in deep calming breaths.

She fingered the red and white board with a wry smile that read "SPUNK & BITE" that the decorators would put this morning before the grand launch of her restaurant, hoping everything would go well.

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6 comments:

  1. I like the way you used the prompt. :)

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    1. Thank you ever so much Ranu. I'm really glad you liked it. Thanks so much for visiting.

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  2. Yeah, I liked this take as well - you get a great sense of the nervous energy as she waits for the big day :)

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    1. Thank you ever so much! I'm really very happy you liked this take. Thanks again for visiting.

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  3. Like the way you expressed the anxious feelings and the happy anticipation of the big day.

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    1. Thank you ever so much for your kind words and for taking the time out to visit. I'm really glad you liked how I've expressed her feelings. Thank you!

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